Voyage of Discovery by
He
says, “People like you are the scum of the earth,” and Angel smiles at him.
Yesterday (Wednesday) was not only the start of new month but
for me it was also the start of a new project. So far, what you see above is
the opening line, but I recognize that by the time I reach the end it may well
have changed. In fact, the scene I’ve been writing may not be the opening scene
any longer, and even the present-tense narrative may not survive the first draft.
But at the moment I’m still in that
excited-but-scared-witless stage I always get at the beginning of a new book.
Finding the right jumping-in point to the story, working out how to best get
across the characters and their situations without piling on loads of
superfluous backstory. And above all trying to craft something that fits with
my hopes and expectations for the work. Vague half-formed ideas and snatches of
dialogue always seem so much better before you trap them into an orderly narrative.
Maybe this time I’ll manage a little more ‘jump first, worry
about the parachute later’ ― much like the main character, Angel.
What makes it a little more daunting is that this book is not
part of my ongoing series―of which DIE
EASY: Charlie Fox book ten will be published in Oct (UK) and Jan (US).
Instead, I’m striking out with a new character, a new setting for the first of
what I very much hope will be a trilogy. (And Angel is a she not a he, in case you
were wondering.) I may be branching out on something new, but I’m sticking with
a strong female protagonist which, I hope, is one of the reasons people read and
enjoy my books.
But here I am now right at the start of my three-leg voyage,
with a reasonable idea of my eventual destination and the ports of call along
the way. I don’t have a full fixed outline, though, and that in itself is
slightly scary. I like to work from a detailed chart. This time I have a few
notes and a sextant ― which will tell me where I am, but not necessarily where
I’m going!
If things progress even halfway according to plan, it’s going
to be a short, sharp and possibly bumpy ride ― think the Southern Ocean rather
than the Norfolk Broads. I’ve set myself a deadline of the beginning of October
to complete the bones of the tale. Two months. That’s a tough schedule by
anyone’s standards. I don’t know yet if I can do it, but sometimes you just
have to take the challenge and give it your best shot.
I don’t even have a fixed title, because this time it’s not a
case of simply naming one book ― I have to fit that into a set of three. They
need to make sense both individually and as a whole, relating to each other as
well as the stories that make up the overall arc.
But I do have a firm picture of Angel Cain, who
I tried out in the CWA short story anthology, ORIGINAL
SINS. She looks at life with a devil-may-care gleam in her eye and a reckless
intensity that makes Charlie Fox
seem quite restrained by comparison. As a travelling companion, I think she’s
going to be a blast ― if she doesn’t get me killed first.
One thing’s for sure, though, I’m sure as hell looking
forward to the journey.
Please excuse a bit of BSP, but this week also saw the
publication of FIFTH VICTIM: Charlie
Fox book nine in UK paperback format, with a stunning new cover. And the
opening line?
‘The
only thing more terrifying than fighting for your life is fighting for someone
else’s.’
This week’s Word of
the Week is corbie, a Scots
dialect word for a raven or crow. From this is also a corbie messenger which is a messenger who returns too late, or not
at all.
Hope it comes to maturity
ReplyDeleteThanks, so do I!
DeleteLooking forward to it! Bon voyage on the new journey.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kate. I have seasickness pills and bug repellent. What more do I need?
DeleteChocolate!
DeleteOoh, good call!
DeleteSounds awesome. Good luck in your writings.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Katrina. I'm hoping for a month of head-down, full-tilt to get a really good start made.
DeleteIt's a nice theory, anyway :)
Nice post, Zoe. I can fully appreciate that 'excited-but-scared-witless' thing. And of course I look forward to your new trilogy.
ReplyDeleteHi Bobby. Yeah, when you have nothing in front of you except a blank file with a cursor sitting in the top left-hand corner, taunting you, it's somewhat daunting!
DeleteBut I think I got my head into gear today, which is a relief.
Zoe, this is my favorite part of writing a book, when it's all potential energy and I haven't made any mistakes yet. I wish you all good speed on the voyage, and I'm sure you'll bring an unforgettable new character to us.
ReplyDeleteHi Tim. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind words. I see Angel as 'Charlie with the brakes off'. Let's see if I can do her justice ...
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of writing a new book is that opening scene. It might take me what seems like forever, but I have the most fun doing it! Good luck on the new venture.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Carrie Lynn
ReplyDeleteWriting that first chapter always takes me the longest because I find if the entry-point into the story isn't correct, the whole thing falls.
Good luck with your own project :)